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ALONE by ~Mushi-No-Iki:iconMushi-No-Iki:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open


No one can see the pain that we hide,
They're happy for us to keep it inside,
Our fear is our own; they don't want to know,
Why sould we involve them; why should it show.

You live your whole life in confusion and fear,
The need to feel something unbearably near,
Half of you living, Half of you gone,
And inside you know what your doing is wrong.

The thing's that can help, the thing's that may heal,
Are the flame or the blade and the sting of the steel,
The destruction of skin means the death of your soul,
But there's nowhere to run when your living alone.
©2004-2009 ~Mushi-No-Iki
:iconmushi-no-iki:

Author's Comments

a poem when i felt obviously alone lol

Comments


love 4 4 joy 1 1 wow 1 1 mad 0 0 sad 4 4 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconmipunai:
~Mipunai Jun 26, 2004, 8:34:14 PM
awsome poem *favs*

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:icondreams-of-erythrite:
~Dreams-of-Erythrite Mar 14, 2007, 6:34:07 PM
I love it! I can relate....
:iconangels--fall--first:
~angels--fall--first Apr 30, 2007, 11:36:49 PM
Beautiful, very profound. And easy to relate too, at least for me. It's great.
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~rebela-wanted May 24, 2007, 10:55:01 AM
nice lyrics ;;)

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Don't waste your lips on words I've heard before :)
:iconwillemorosehill:
~WillemoRosehill Dec 9, 2007, 12:19:09 PM
I know what you mean... Love how you are describing all of thoose feelings... It's really a great poem! :+fav:
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~Tailslane357 Jan 30, 2008, 3:47:18 PM
yep i agree gd poem
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~myTRAGICheart Mar 10, 2008, 2:30:55 AM
yes me to .. good poem !

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im writing my own words my own little page my epic drama my own scripted page
:iconbellapoo:
~BellaPoo Mar 10, 2008, 6:08:18 PM
Beautiful TT_TT

I can easily relate x_x


And don't worry, even if you feel alone sometimes, there's always someone there for you, no matter their size, age, gender, or whether they're real or not~

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lolwhat?
:icondarkshadows17:
~Darkshadows17 Mar 15, 2008, 8:14:40 PM
I love it. Very well written.
Sorry you feel alone:(
I'm always here...

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"So speak kind to a stranger,
Cause you'll never know,
It just might be an angel,
Come knockin at your door,
Come knockin at your door."
:iconfreakbook:
~freakbook Mar 23, 2008, 11:36:09 AM
I love it. You put what my heart was screaming in words.

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Shoot for the moon, and if you miss, you will always land with the stars.
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just keep going and don't look back
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