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Hiding in the corner,
With his wings tucked in,
Tears in his eyes,
And cuts in his skin,
He once was innocent,
At some point in time,
Because of his scars,
He's no longer divine,
His wings are withered,
His arms rest on his knees,
His tears run down,
As fast as his wrist bleeds,
Do you see him,
Hiding over there,
Are you going to act,
Like you don't care,
In torment and tears,
He does dwell,
We cannot help,
This Tainted Angel...
one of my favs
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serenityninja Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing
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Silversong9 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
Great poem. I love how it creates an image in your head and it reminds me of a place my mind once was.
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ZellGurl Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
How do u think up such great poems?
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Hinagiku-Yoosei Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011
great imagery......and its short and sweet....*thumbs up*
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TheLulustarz Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010
Tainted angel
Can't you see?
Tainted angel
Please help me
Scars from my past
Scars that should not last
Tainted angel
Please don't pass
This is my last
Plea
to the.
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xrated9390 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010
wow, you are really talented.
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SelfImposedExile Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
there is no help but to admire.....
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frecklegal Featured By Owner May 11, 2009
thats really nice ^.^
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xilamne Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2009
It paints a picture when you read it... have to fav this one too.
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sabby-latina-goth666 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2004
i love this poem cause it remindes me of how i feel!
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